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I made another song. And yet again I feel like I've made even more improvements. Feedback appreciated if possible. It would really help as I know there are some things wrong with it that I can't place my finger on.
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Has anyone noticed that Golden Star Frontier is extremely emotionally draining to me.
Maybe I should just tone everything down.
I'm thinking of trying something else. I don't need the constant stomach heat flashes and emotional drain from making music, drawing and writing the way I do right now.
I THINK it's fun and cool to do. But I am starting to realize it's self destructive because of the way I personally look at it. There's some vague thoughts going on I can't explain that just over-stimulate me that I don't always entirely notice. It's just every day is a constant bombardment of GSF ideas and stomach heat flashes.
I just can't handle i
Even more music.
Feedback appreciated. The videos may not show up on mobile.
A lot of music I've made recently.
Yeah, still going at it. I haven't posted my music here in quite some time. I'd like to think I'm making progress. The top is the newest and the bottom is the oldest. Hope you like it to whoever see's it. Don't head bang too hard.
I tried to make an extratone song.
When it comes to something this intense it's kind of hard to find what to work with. Also, I'm not sure but I think if you're on mobile you won't be able to see the video.
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You have the song builded up with the first theme. have a break to introduce the second, but keep the first in the background. that is great layering. I think the drums around 1:22 and further are a bit dominant.
you even have a third theme, and return to the first. I really approve of this, it gives the song a rounded touch to it
you really really improved! Which feedback of mine helped you out really in the end. I'm kind of curious of what most influenced you out of all the things I said.
you even have a third theme, and return to the first. I really approve of this, it gives the song a rounded touch to it
you really really improved! Which feedback of mine helped you out really in the end. I'm kind of curious of what most influenced you out of all the things I said.